Yes we all need to pray. But that shit wasn't even luke warm. Maybe you need to pray for better rhymes[quote:2b8d307188="Raw_uk"]we all sit under the same stars at night as the cars drive by we all see the same bright white moon sat up till 6am still eyes wide drreamin of times not dried out by our stress n doom layin in bed thinking of the shit weve survived i lost my cuz 2 drugs n ill repair in time ive lied n cried just 2 make think right but i wont ever stop dreaming untill im mind blind always behind at work,was at school 2,every crew has been hurt but how does it affect you why do we have people in the dirt jus coz we call it the earth it aint a nice place no more why would any women wanna give birth Yes, we all need to pray. But that shit wasn't even luke warm. Pray for better rhymes. coz all they gonna c is death n carnage as a baby now u wonder why there gonna hurt inside n grow up 2 be crazy maybe things wont ever change but if we all stick together n pray it'll be a better place someday!Raw_uk[/quote:2b8d307188][quote:2b8d307188][/quote:2b8d307188]
pray for ticket sales with that kind of shizznit
Indeed. I don't have a good feeling about a large amonut of tickets going nowhere on that one. I guess Raw boy signed off to write some more. I can tell he is not skilled enuff to come right off the top with them. Oh well> I guess he is not that blessed.
was a poem not a rap,open yah minds u fools...not everythin i write is rap n hip hop....bye
I give you credit for effort. Nice to see a poem.
Trying to call it a poem after it is rejected is a smart move. But a little too late. It has already been exposed to what it really is. What makes us fool? Cause we ain't feeling it? Well if so, I confess, I am a fool then. Peace!
Sort of a depressing goddam poem at that.