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i dunno. you shouldnt write like its a book, cos people cant tell how it flows and its so much harder to read. [b:6bcc052d62]its a dirty feelin on the streets out here/full of expensive murders n mothers in fear/but the baby hustlin for a dream sticks round coz he can c wat he lookin 4 mite be near;/ [/b:6bcc052d62] [i:6bcc052d62]its a dirty feelin on the streets out here full of expensive murders n mothers in fear but the baby hustlin for a dream sticks round coz he can c wat he lookin 4 mite be near[/i:6bcc052d62] much easier to read you got some good lyrics in there, but its a little bit basic, but what u sayin is heavy and you jus need 2 make it bit less simplistic adn it would be really good safe [/b]

[quote:75778e1f88="uk"]i dunno. you shouldnt write like its a book, cos people cant tell how it flows and its so much harder to read. [b:75778e1f88]its a dirty feelin on the streets out here/full of expensive murders n mothers in fear/but the baby hustlin for a dream sticks round coz he can c wat he lookin 4 mite be near;/ [/b:75778e1f88] [i:75778e1f88]its a dirty feelin on the streets out here full of expensive murders n mothers in fear but the baby hustlin for a dream sticks round coz he can c wat he lookin 4 mite be near[/i:75778e1f88] much easier to read you got some good lyrics in there, but its a little bit basic, but what u sayin is heavy and you jus need 2 make it bit less simplistic adn it would be really good safe NO START IT LIKE THIS/ ITS A DIRTY GAME ON THESE STREETS OUT HER/FULL OF MURDERS PUTTING FEAR ON THE HEARTS OF OUR MOTHER/ GOT THEM ASKING WHY OR BETTER YET WHEN/ IT SEEMS LIKE IN THE GHETTO WE WAITING OR SHOULD I SAY INTICIP[ATING TO DIE/ MOST OF US ISWILLING TO RIDE/ BUT FOR WHAT A QUICK BUCK/ AND A LITTLE GHETTO FAME/ IT'S A DAMN SHAME/ ANOTHER BROTHA LOST HIS LIFE / LIVING ANOTHER ANGRY BLACK PERSON HERE TO FIGHT/ FOR WHAT WHEN EVERYDAY ITS A STRUGGLE, JUST TO SURVIVE, AND IM STILL ASKING WHY... [/b][/quote:75778e1f88]

she dont need you changing whats shes written jus organise it better, dont listen to dis one, she dont no wot she talqkin bout. [quote:533e2bb9fe]LIVING ANOTHER ANGRY BLACK PERSON HERE TO FIGHT[/quote:533e2bb9fe] dat lines old and played out, i dont wana hear dat the whole time. people living much worse than you ever will so shut up [b:533e2bb9fe]if havin a gat makes you a gangster, then that shits fake cos ive heard of yutes in rwanda dat been strapped since eight[/b:533e2bb9fe]-lowkey BLAOWWWWWWWW peace

thanks man i appriciate ur honesty n input

i agree with dat song. specially the part about giving a homeless man money. better of giving him a kick in his ass

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